So far so good as of chapter 5 it’s a incredibley Intresting concept for a Star Wars story. While some of the writing seems to be ai generated most of the time the writing is solid the only complaints I have is the pacing the story is going so fast that we don’t get to see leoluche build up his relationships, reputation and power it’s just told to the reader in a few paragraphs. I hope it was only fast paced at the start to get to the clone wars and it’ll slow done if it does then this story has great potential.
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I plan to slow down considerably now that the clone wars have begun. And yes, most of the embellishment on the non-combat descriptions and such is ai generated, i couldn't possibly output half this much otherwise as i do have a full time job, and i’d be stuck at a descriptive scene for days(i suck at those). Still they are heavily edited by me as AI generated writing tends to be… dubious and inconsistent.
Yeah fair enough I don’t mind the ai generated parts of the writing. Glad you’re slowing down on the clone wars, it’s understandable why you did the time skip to get to the clone wars considering the lack of mainstream material for the times before the clone wars. Keep up the good work, best of luck to you.
Phantom17:I plan to slow down considerably now that the clone wars have begun. And yes, most of the embellishment on the non-combat descriptions and such is ai generated, i couldn't possibly output half this much otherwise as i do have a full time job, and i’d be stuck at a descriptive scene for days(i suck at those). Still they are heavily edited by me as AI generated writing tends to be… dubious and inconsistent.
Thanks, I really appreciate it and i hope you enjoy it as well :)
Dros_Sant:Yeah fair enough I don’t mind the ai generated parts of the writing. Glad you’re slowing down on the clone wars, it’s understandable why you did the time skip to get to the clone wars considering the lack of mainstream material for the times before the clone wars. Keep up the good work, best of luck to you.image
