The story follows the vein of HxH, with the internal dialogues and explanations making you feel that it is authentically HxH. The character shows an intelligent and opportunistic personality, knowing when and how to act, and the development of the story revolving around the canon material is something to be appreciated. However, the story is not exciting. The main character has one of those systems that allows him to have powers from other franchises, and it is obvious that everything is easy for him with it. Also, the story only has talking and no fighting or problems (Kastro vs Hisoka being an example), and the author does not seem to recognize that the circumstances of the movie "The Last Mission" are not canon and cannot be used as a reference. If it were the movie "Phantom Rouge" (which is also not canon) it would still be acceptable to reference it, but "The Last Mission" is a serious mistake. The fanfic is good, but not that special, so if you prefer a well-told story with little action, read it. I say all this based on the fact that it is still an underdeveloped fanfic. If the author corrected these details, it would be a much higher quality story.
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