The story follows the vein of HxH, with the internal dialogues and explanations making you feel that it is authentically HxH. The character shows an intelligent and opportunistic personality, knowing when and how to act, and the development of the story revolving around the canon material is something to be appreciated. However, the story is not exciting. The main character has one of those systems that allows him to have powers from other franchises, and it is obvious that everything is easy for him with it. Also, the story only has talking and no fighting or problems (Kastro vs Hisoka being an example), and the author does not seem to recognize that the circumstances of the movie "The Last Mission" are not canon and cannot be used as a reference. If it were the movie "Phantom Rouge" (which is also not canon) it would still be acceptable to reference it, but "The Last Mission" is a serious mistake. The fanfic is good, but not that special, so if you prefer a well-told story with little action, read it. I say all this based on the fact that it is still an underdeveloped fanfic. If the author corrected these details, it would be a much higher quality story.

Another bland story with an absolutely unbalanced main character. Over the 80 chapters I've read, MC is already stronger than most of the Verse characters - right down to individual members of the Spider Troupe. And I would have accepted this fact if the Main Character "Deserved" his abilities, but... no. He won them in gacha. The number of golden fingers in the wrong place on MC increases with every tenth chapter. In general, the MC is a typical Mary Sue. All his plans go well or even better. All his opponents are obviously weaker and stupider than him. The rest of the characters in the story simply bend under his will, unable to make their own decisions - or simply deprived of this privilege. (I might have gone a bit overboard here, but in general this is my personal subjective opinion) Also, over all the past chapters, the only thing that is reported about the main Character is that his name is Lan. That's all. Well, he's also kind of thin and sometimes handsome? There were no other descriptions besides this. In the end, I simply cannot accept such a high rating for this fanfic. It is simply tasteless with a main character who is more of a function than a person. I consider further ranting unnecessary - that's all.

there is another translation of this ff, but it is horrendous, this one is supee nice

After main story starts 😬🙄🤢🤢🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ……………………… ……………………… …………………… 😴😴😴🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱😴😴😴😴😴😴😴🥱🥱🥱🥱😴😴😴😴😴😴🥱🥱🥱😴😴😴😴🥱🥱🥱😴😴🥱🥱😴🥱🥱😴🥱

Since this is my work, going to give it five stars, I am not going to give a review of the story so as not to appear biased. Have fun reading, guys; if you like the story, come and give me support at my Patreon. 😁😁😁

Please change the cover of the translation, I pray by all the gods..........................................................................

Can someone tell me what is the mc harem members right now please

Good translation, one of the best, continue please.

very good so far. I can't wait for more chapters

Trash should just stop translating this garbage fanfic already. If I was any of the strong people the mic meet already I would kill him as soon as possible with all the knowledge he seems to have.