I think the book is pretty good and it’s interesting but I am curious is there going to be dual cultivation techniques and if so, is the MC and the heroines both going to learn the techniques

Author is mc is naive, idiot, beta pathetic, good guy, righteous, self righteous?

I am here to write a review after 100 chapters are complete and I have gotten many comments about how excessive the background information is, but I don't think possible for me to change that as It is been in locked chapters which I can't change even if I wanted to. HOWEVER, I WILL SAY ONE THING THAT YOU CAN SKIP FROM 48 TO 59 IF YOU DON'T WANT TO SEE THE PAST OF AVA AND ISLA THERE IS ALSO SOME INFORMATION ON THESE THAT WOULD BE IMPORTANT BUT YOU CAN STILL SKIP AS I WOULD ADD THOSE LITTLE BY LITTLE IN UPCOMING WHICH ARE IMPORTANT TO FOR BETTER UNDERSTANDING OF THE NOVEL.

Shameless Author POV: "The feeling of giving your novel 5 stars is pretty good" Author "Aren't you little to arrogant for a newbie author" Some random kid "Well, If I didn't not appreciated my own work then who will" Author "Of course, I will specially the scene where Goddess **** *****..." Some random kid "Well, Aren't you a man of culture my guy" Author "You have good eyes, Author" Some random kid "Well, how old are you to be this good" Author "I am definitely 18+" Some random kid "Really" Author "Well, I am just few weeks" Some random kid "How many weeks" Author "Only 157 week " Some random kid "..." Author "Well I am going, My mother is calling me for doing school homework " Some random kid

This story really has great potential… but a ton of filler chapters and meh grammar. The filler chapters focus on too many side characters imo. Like before the MC woke up. I actually like a few chapters introducing aunt may and the sister, but it drags too long and includes too much stuff outside of whats going on. Also, too many chapters spent on MC and his sisters flirting. He was only 11. Feels weird. Should have done it closer to 15. Plus… you straight up skipped chapters on him and aunt may early on. This writing really needs polishing to make it a great story. More meaningful dialogue, and more structure. Sometimes it feels all over the place. Focus more on whats important. Thats my review from chapter 46.

This is really a great job, author! There is only one problem, and that is his excessive softness with his sister. Judging by their interactions and his constant concessions, the harem will not begin until chapter 1000, if it begins at all. I would like to hope that the dynamics in the relationship between mc and his sister will change soon, and the harem part will begin. Sorry if I offended you, just a little dissatisfaction.

It feels like the author is procrastinating getting to the actual world evolution because he doesn't actually know how he's going to write that aspect of the story. To me it feels like this entire 100 and some odd chapters are just one extremely unnecessarily long prologue that should have ended at least 30-40 chapters ago. Otherwise it's a pretty good story.

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What an amazing book, I can't wait for this planet to evolve and explore other planets, discovering unique races!!! Hope this novel continues!

So far so good its a good setting with good characters and a slow pace, but I would need more chapters. And the goddess acting immature. First, I thought it was like a dual cultivation novel with logic, then I read your comment . If there is a background story behind it, then I would like to find out more. I will give you five stars for motivation and everything good so far.