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Elvenerable
ElvenerableLv23mth
2024-08-02 12:17

Joder cuanto le tocará aparecer los personajes de JJK que sobrevivieron al final como todou best frendo para que se haga amigo de megumi , yuki talvez Shoko , mei mei y ui ui y talvez Miguel Jdr choso ojalá aún que estará deprimido o talvez si esta vivo culpe de todo a megumi por su debilidad y intente matarlo si es que sigue con vida o algo Seria buen arco argumental que aparezca un plan C de kenjaku donde salgan retoños malditos inteligentes de algún laboratorio de kenjaku y megumi sea obligado a volver al trabajo para capturarlos o luchar contra ellos Duda habrá harem ?¿ o tripareja dime que seee, megumi de tanto dolor se merece algo [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]

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TJohnS
TJohnSAuthor

En respuesta a las preguntas; no tengo muchos planes para los personajes que sobrevivieron a JJK. Y sí, será un harén

Shaka_De_Virgo
Shaka_De_VirgoLv3

So you've already decided that it will be a harem instead of making different endings for each one?

TJohnS:En respuesta a las preguntas; no tengo muchos planes para los personajes que sobrevivieron a JJK. Y sí, será un harén
TJohnS
TJohnSAuthor

It will be hard asf, but I'll make it happen

Shaka_De_Virgo:So you've already decided that it will be a harem instead of making different endings for each one?
Shaka_De_Virgo
Shaka_De_VirgoLv3

Thanks, you have one of the best fics, how many chapters do you think this fic will have?

TJohnS:It will be hard asf, but I'll make it happen
TJohnS
TJohnSAuthor

More than 100

Shaka_De_Virgo:Thanks, you have one of the best fics, how many chapters do you think this fic will have?
Shaka_De_Virgo
Shaka_De_VirgoLv3

Excellent news

TJohnS:More than 100
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Ichorblut
IchorblutLv4

First off, I just started reading this particular story because of Megumi. Of course, I am familiar with the Quintuplets, but I am not a fan of rom-coms. However, this is very well executed, the premise of Megumi someone who is traumatized and depressed, helping five different girls. The themes are pretty clear. obviously romance, family, and fear/anxiety. That's my synopsis or summary. Some minor criticism from me, it's pretty noticeable that the lack of a large cast of characters is harmful. Because as soon as a scene involving the siblings starts or ends, it's easy to tell what is going to happen. Though you gave them more depth. Also, the aspect of JJK is very small so far and currently not relevant, considering the circumstances. However, I do hope it will be involved more in the future. What I think is very well executed, is the drama. It is rather easy to get immersed in. That's mostly because of the character interactions and dialogues. Everyone acts in a way that fits their character (else it would be probably harder to integrate Bumgumi), which makes the character arcs more compelling and understandable. Another strong quality is the length and release of the chapters. Until now, new chapters come after 1 or 2 days, and as already said they are pretty long (I estimate ~2000 words per chapter, take it with a grain of salt, tho). The overall writing is very satisfying, not the usual forced sophisticated style or over-descriptions and straight to the point, but not necessarily dumbed down. It's pretty familiar and approachable. I would like to see in which other directions the author can go after this fanfiction and am still very thrilled for more.

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