Review Detail of Korkyros in Naruto: Fusion Center

Respectfully, I wholeheartedly disagree. I love that the author skipped the pretransmigration backstory that nobody cares about, and I didn’t really need to see someone learn the rasengan for the 10th time. Basically the author is only writing the interesting stuff, with good use of time skips. Also you are just wrong about dialogue, maybe you just don’t like evil hiruzen and shy kushina?

No, I dont have an issue with Evil Hiruzen due to I can not see a world with how he was written in canon where he isnt either as evil as danzo, incompetent to the level of complete detriment, or has a disease due to his age or ptsd that prevent him from doing the proper thing. There is also the fact that the things danzo and hiruzen do are only seen as evil by modern people because of modern morality. Shy Kushina feels weird because of what we see in canon but this is a fanfic so I am fine with it. but a story is supposed to be about the journey not the random tidbits of information we get.

Ok I think I see your point, I just disagree. Guess that makes this an art discussion haha, well done author

This has probably been the most civil disagreement I have experienced on this platform. I only raised the points as criticism so that IF the author agrees but was unaware they can adjust their writing style because this was my opinion. It is also my opinion that IF I do not like a story, I do not have to read it. I also wont leave criticism if I did not find the story at least intriguing.