Review Detail of cosmicRider in ASOIAF: The Tale Of Aurelius Fenris

Great start but too much gpt and no character prospective no goal other then doing stupid things 🤦😮‍💨 bro you started great and with great story in mind but gpt ruined it all there no character development mc is fool I'll be not surprised in next chapter he is licking the boots of king of iron throne and why f mc will care for the iron throne if he wakes up north is free no more iron throne because there is only one king of the north who's name is stark and make him fucking brandon brother and stop making a fool out of him make him ruthless or like tywin because he is a fucking legend according to your story he will not be some ' yes sir ' type person be belongs to a ruthless aggressive era borth fighting with children of forest and ice demons so develop in that way