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this is a three legged dragon 😂
oohh you sweet summer child you have no idea
entertain me mortal
🤣🤣 same reaction bro 🤣🤣
one the best Harry Potter and House of the dragon fanfic just read it with open mind I simply love it and mc character development to understand his standing and the other character of old king and queen is true to their original nature no whitewash thank you for writing this brother you don't know how I was searching for this kind of fanfic
It's all right
yeah he is blind towards his other family with his second wife
Still it's not easy because he is not shooting them with guns he is using a sword with require muscle mass and stamina to fight and he is 12 it is not possible at that age to fight several people with sword at 14 or 16 it will become be believe able 12 is little to young rest it's story still better than other gpt story and use curse wording and blood and Gore to make it feel more realistic
Great start but too much gpt and no character prospective no goal other then doing stupid things 🤦😮💨 bro you started great and with great story in mind but gpt ruined it all there no character development mc is fool I'll be not surprised in next chapter he is licking the boots of king of iron throne and why f mc will care for the iron throne if he wakes up north is free no more iron throne because there is only one king of the north who's name is stark and make him fucking brandon brother and stop making a fool out of him make him ruthless or like tywin because he is a fucking legend according to your story he will not be some ' yes sir ' type person be belongs to a ruthless aggressive era borth fighting with children of forest and ice demons so develop in that way
What the fuxk is that 🤦 and why he is your grace to mc 🤦 he is the oldest most scariest person in the north he who is called the one man army he who is called the ice dragon for the amount of destruction he did in his time is bowing and saying your grace to a dragon spawn it's outrageous