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Review Detail of IamMountTai in The Villain Professor's Second Chance

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I have read all the free chapters. The story is on the slower side, but it's good from what I've read so far. It's just it's a little weird to see no focus on much named characters so far in the story considering its based off a game and a real fantasy world. I would think that such a thing would be brought up and the mc would focus on developing these key characters, but it seems there is lack of concern of that with full focus on his own development. People have brought the issue that is similar to The Villian wants to Live. Definitely I see the similarities, but it's at least different enough and a bit too much to call it plagiarism. However it is concerning. The similarities are like the Amberine backstory plot, the foreshadowing of the timid professor seeming to have more to what she shows. Then you stack these on more minor ones like Amberine being the rival of a blonde genius high borne girl. The fiance of the mc is a silver haired knight girl. All of these can be easily changed to avoid these similarities, but instead is left in this story which makes it feel plagiarised. I will be keeping a close eye on this. While the writing is definitely good for this site, I can definitely see some chat gpt writing style in the writing which feels jaring for me to read at times since I'm familiar with the style of overly being melodramatic at times which aren't appropriate and too much usage hinders the significance of the scene. Fortunately it's not too bad. Overall it's a good novel at least for the free chapters I've read so far. Though it's concerning points should be addressed someway or another. Since there's romance I do hope there's a good focus on that. I do not wish for a clear main heroine, so if you could keep me guessing that would be great! I would like to see some focus on Elara as the novel is quite swarmed with Amberine focus besides the Mc. Perhaps some character art author? Thanks!

The Villain Professor's Second Chance

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