BEST FRIENDS

I like this metaphor.

Good! Better than the typical... the protagonist wasn't going to use it anyways nonsense.

I have read all the free chapters. The story is on the slower side, but it's good from what I've read so far. It's just it's a little weird to see no focus on much named characters so far in the story considering its based off a game and a real fantasy world. I would think that such a thing would be brought up and the mc would focus on developing these key characters, but it seems there is lack of concern of that with full focus on his own development. People have brought the issue that is similar to The Villian wants to Live. Definitely I see the similarities, but it's at least different enough and a bit too much to call it plagiarism. However it is concerning. The similarities are like the Amberine backstory plot, the foreshadowing of the timid professor seeming to have more to what she shows. Then you stack these on more minor ones like Amberine being the rival of a blonde genius high borne girl. The fiance of the mc is a silver haired knight girl. All of these can be easily changed to avoid these similarities, but instead is left in this story which makes it feel plagiarised. I will be keeping a close eye on this. While the writing is definitely good for this site, I can definitely see some chat gpt writing style in the writing which feels jaring for me to read at times since I'm familiar with the style of overly being melodramatic at times which aren't appropriate and too much usage hinders the significance of the scene. Fortunately it's not too bad. Overall it's a good novel at least for the free chapters I've read so far. Though it's concerning points should be addressed someway or another. Since there's romance I do hope there's a good focus on that. I do not wish for a clear main heroine, so if you could keep me guessing that would be great! I would like to see some focus on Elara as the novel is quite swarmed with Amberine focus besides the Mc. Perhaps some character art author? Thanks!

I've read l and doesn't flow nicely. It has the author's narrators voice mixed with clear chat gpt usage to the extent that it hurts the writing. I honestly find MTL a much better reading experience. I'm sorry but this is my honest thoughts.

Crazy how Amy is rank 1 in popularity surpassing Belle and even Mc. Yet shafted. I don't mind Raven, but he hasn't really shined enough. It's funny since I usually prefer the original mc over the protagonist in these novels. If you can reconsider the pairings that would be great!

Nooooooooooooooooo :(

Dang author! I was shipping Brandon with Amy!

nice chapter

Royalroad

With how OP this cognitive ability is, it's quite bs that he was unable to think of a reason in the end. Even if he lacks info, which I say in this super brain mode he doesn't, some things could have been expressed.

Rather, the most likely reason is because the author wants you to continue reading. Cliffhangers are substantial in web novel writing.

No. I'm not sure what you are talking about. This line is just a chant.

I see. The no protection really is unfortunate. Very enlightening to hear that the income is actually relatively the same. I would've thought the income would be better through advanced chapters and maybe an avenue like Amazon, provided you had a decent following. So disheartening... I hope your new novel pops off well! Thank you very much for the information! Will be supporting~

Certainly I also thought the writing style isn't something you would see in RR. But I didn't think it would be so detrimental. First person hate certainly is a thing and you may lack descriptions and other things, but I feel as long as the story conveyed is good then it would at least be okay. Could you inform me in detail in regards to the issues with RR now? As an aspiring author, it would help me immensely to be informed. Thank you.

Out of curiosity author, did you ever think of uploading this story to RR instead of here? I'm aware that TAPV is where you started and your desire to make something a little similar and better here, so it makes sense for it to be published on this platform. But in terms of income, it is concerning as you have addressed on your discord regarding TAPV. Wouldn't it have been better to have published it there despite RR being much much more critical and even if the content of the story may not have much appeal as here? At least from what I've read of this story, I do think it has what it takes to have some decent popularity there even if the standards are high there. Would greatly appreciate your answer Author nim.

But a library... unless it's different in this world.

Despite all the hate. I love it! The awkward teenage start to a relationship. Awesome work author!

Just see my reviews for other novels!

Double Plagiarism. It should be made clear that this is a translation of the Korean author who wrote this. Furthermore, translations taken are from a person who has been currently translating this work. Do not support.