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Seems more and more like it is written by chat gpt the plot seems like an after thought the more u read its cool to actually see a superman in marvel doing superman stuff but i dont see any connection to people he has no one he loves some of the character interactions dont make sense and then their is a flash back that makes him seem like a toddler. Just everything makes it seem like this is a child that got these powers and not a mature adult.
A Superman in Marvel
Mohammed_Jawad
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I’m not gonna lie I do use chatgpt to help me.I’m really trying to better my writing style and make this a really good story I’m still learning at the moment but trust me the next chapters ahead will be very good.And this is a young Superman that I’m working on he’s still a teenager and the flashbacks I put I’ve done to try and make him look arrogant and more childish but as he finally gains more experience he knows this isn’t a game and tries his best to help..I’m gonna do a rewrite of all the chapters soon probably before the official planet hulk arc but trust me I’m gonna make this readable.
Yeah any story that uses chatgpt to write their stories is not worth reading. Write your own stuff and get better at it lol being lazy and having an Ai do your work is never going to help you
Mohammed_Jawad:I’m not gonna lie I do use chatgpt to help me.I’m really trying to better my writing style and make this a really good story I’m still learning at the moment but trust me the next chapters ahead will be very good.And this is a young Superman that I’m working on he’s still a teenager and the flashbacks I put I’ve done to try and make him look arrogant and more childish but as he finally gains more experience he knows this isn’t a game and tries his best to help..I’m gonna do a rewrite of all the chapters soon probably before the official planet hulk arc but trust me I’m gonna make this readable.
DaoistyQNGiX:Yeah any story that uses chatgpt to write their stories is not worth reading. Write your own stuff and get better at it lol being lazy and having an Ai do your work is never going to help you