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LastGod7hComentouThor .... god they did him dirty
"Isn't it true? They botched Civil War, ruined Doctor Strange, threw in Captain Marvel for no reason just to mess things up even more. And don't get me started on that Thor fiasco!"- LastGod7hComentou"No need to continue; I already know you're going to start ranting about how Disney ruined everything."
- LastGod7hPostado
I have a rule in what HP fanfic i read. One rule is NO GUNS. Guns cheapen magic think of harry not learning anything at school the walking up to voldermort and bang hes dead. It makes you ask why even make a wizarding world. NOW like every good rule thier are exceptions. Here they are its not just if an HP fanfic has guns its more. If the MC is amazingly powerful or talented at magic AND uses guns. Thats where this story is broken for me. See ive read and loved the HP fanfic (cant remember name) where Harry loses his trial is kick out of the magic world and joins the army becoming apart of the SAS. Then takes out malfoy and voldermort with a sniper. That is when the exceptions make great stories. Or thier is one fanfic where harry becomes Duke of magical england and has planes and helicopters outfitted with magic and becomes a magical military. Again he maybe strong with magic but hes duke and apart of british aristocrats so he is duty bound to use everything to protect the country. But this is closer to the cheaping side where the MC is amazingly talented and powerful but just wants a magical gun. It cheapens all hes doing to become good at magic.
- LastGod8hComentou
really starting to hate where this is going. A magical gun battle ruins the whole setup of a magical world.
Nathan unsealed another restriction on the lenses to see what was being covered by the auror robes. The view that the lenses provided to his eye did not lessen his questions and merely led to a higher curiosity as Nathan found himself wondering why some of the Russian law enforcement carrying enchanted pistols that were clearly in violation of international laws. Nathan guessed that countries did not need much reason to violate international law but it still was a curious addition. - LastGod8hComentou
im fine with world building, but you need to know it can open up wholes in the story if you build the world too big or too complicated.
If you like the idea. Drop some powerstones and some comments and reviews regarding the story's direction until now and moving forward. - LastGod8hComentou
writting is good but make sure the info is not repeated it already alittle wordy if u start repeating thing it makes me what to skip chapters. Like the whole merlin invented spell casting arithmancy thing.
I hope you all are satisfied with the story's direction and my attempts at world building. - LastGod21hComentouI still hope you like the chapter and can drop powerstones so that I can get a bit higher on the power rankings at least better than the badly translated Chinese novels.
- LastGod21hComentou
my fleur delacour
A|N: Some of you have asked who is the female main character, it is Fleur Delacour. - LastGod1dPostado
This is.... basically any trashy romance novel u pick up at a gas station. But worse. Eventually that get to the point and discribe acutal sex. this is all euphemisms and esptic description. I mean u dont got to be crass and u can even be alittle inventive. But u eventually have to get to where the pole A goes into slot B. This is already so wordy you think the author was trying to make the most elaborate boom ever written. Describing again and again how the dude is surrendering to passion..... okay we only need to say that once and only one way to get the point. Then move on to the banging. The writting also smells of chat gpt though we will never know if that is true or not. But with the redundancy of the elaborate description of passion thier is a good chance.
- LastGod1dComentou"Yes! A huge monkey that climbs tall buildings," Celsius said excitedly.
- LastGod1dComentou"I've never been to the United States before. I wonder if we'll see a giant monkey," Celsius said enthusiastically.
- LastGod1dComentou
??? go to another shop
Although Qi Jun was somewhat resentful that the pawnshop owner had driven a hard bargain, being undocumented meant stability was his priority. - LastGod1dComentou
100k = 13k usd
Under the indifferent gaze of the pawnshop owner, who had no curiosity, Qi Jun pawned the only item he could sell without raising suspicion—a Guanyin jade pendant—for eight hundred dollars, even though he had bought the pendant for over a hundred thousand yuan before his transmigration. - LastGod1dComentou
????
Under the indifferent gaze of the pawnshop owner, who had no curiosity, Qi Jun pawned the only item he could sell without raising suspicion—a Guanyin jade pendant—for eight hundred dollars, even though he had bought the pendant for over a hundred thousand yuan before his transmigration. - LastGod1dComentou
every chinese person with a phone
Especially the sweatshirt pocket containing Huawei's latest high-end smartphone, the P30! - LastGod1dComentou
aaah young maasita peng
Anyone who had seen "Iron Man 1" would understand why Qi Jun knew he had arrived in the Marvel world. - LastGod1dPostado
Another disappointment 😞 😮💨 Why can no one do Gilgamesh right. This is not overpowered. This is weak to strong. He has no training he has no understanding of the power he holds, and he's just a sad man from a different universe who wants a nap and warm milk. I can not even understand what his thoughts are. He knows how dangerous this world is, but his first thought is to just ignore the power he has and not use it. And go out and drink. Gilgamesh is not a god and can still be killed. Not by a bullet, but how do we know if he can by a missile.
- LastGod1dComentou
another disappointment 😞 😮💨
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