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Review Detail of sighduck in Pokemon- World's 'Strongest' Trainer

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This fic checks a lot of boxes for me. It’s lighthearted but not superficial. My only critique would be that some chapters feel a bit scatterbrained, for example having a multi-week timeskip within a chapter that isn’t a training montage. That could just be my personal bias as a reader, though. Looking forward to more chaps!

Pokemon- World's 'Strongest' Trainer

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I am inherently scatterbrained... thats why there's so many tangents! I have severe ADHD lol! Sorry about that >~<