Great story do far. pretty unique relative to other fanfics. I like the characters and powers. I definitely hope he takes more action in the future but I think we eventually will, there's more focus on character growth at the moment but thats just as important. Definitely should give it a try. Only thing thats lacking is grammar but its not enough to hurt the rating in my opinion. Keep up the good work.
Fat_Cultivator
Liked it!
GOSTAR