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At this time 6 chapters of this are out, of these I've read 3 so take what I write with a grain of salt, maybe it will improve down the line. -This entire fanfic soo far feels like the wet dream of an overly horny teenager. -The reason for the MC's reincarnation is idiotic to the extreme. -The mc is born as a child born of rape, now this in itself is not really a problem, more so in how it's handled. After the MC's mom gets home, Mito, essentially threatens to kill her if she dares to make the choice regarding her own body, to terminate the child, and basically tells her to just get over it. And EVERYONE treats this like some completely normal shit to do. My problem is that this didn't need to be handled like this, the author could have made Mito offer to terminate the child, with the MC's mom considering and then refusing it, finding meaning in raising an innocent kid after the loss of her career, which would have actually been an inspiring character trait. But NO instead let's tell the rape victim to MAN UP already. Really? Anyone intending to read this will pretty much find this all out in the first 3 chapters so I really don't feel like this is spoiling anything.

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