Review Detail of CouchPotatoDandy in Instead of Arya, I prefer her mom (Eragon)

So far the story is quite good. There aren't any grammar mistakes and the flow between paragraph and paragraph is excellent. The story itself is also quite refreshing, without the normal narrative where the MC become a rider. I won't say there aren't any things I don't like so far (chapter 23), such as the MC treating Sapiro like a normal common animal and not the dragon with a sentient conscience being that she is. Or him being quite broody as the chapters go on. Anyway so far I enjoyed it so I will give it a five-star review and hold my fingers in a hope the author won't drop it like many other Eragon fanfic.