CouchPotatoDandy

I can't believe those ba$tards in Webnovel deleted this fanfic, what is their problem?? Thanks translator for republishing this fanfic again and I advise you to also publish it on different sits as well such as Scribble Hub etc.

This getting ridiculous out of proportion! Not only does the MC let another dude live in his head, but he also let him control his body now??

Sigh, I couldn't stand that Izuna was in the MC's head talking all the time and hoped the MC will get rid of him or at least seal him, but now not only that didn't happen but he instead got another person stuck in his head!

A very nice story, unfortunately the translation is very crooked and hard to read with many translation mistakes. For example, many times the Marines ranks are translated wrong, what is Major rank in the Marines? Or Colonel? This ranks don't exist..

I write this review as of chapter 187. The translation is ok, there are some mistakes here and there but the quality gets better and it's nice to read. The plot itself is good with no plot holes or the MC doing stupid and not logical things. Also the Golden Finger of the MC is not complicated and is easy to understand, and the most important the system is consistent and didn't have problems like in most Chinese fanfic. The only downside to this fanfic is that the author (not the translator) didn't continue to write cuz of health issues and the last chapter (187) is just him wrapping up the story quickly and abruptly. A real shame as the MC just started his conquest of the world... So in summary, I would definitely recommend this to any fan of One Piece fanfic, and I would like to thank the translator for all his hard work!

First of all I would say thanks for finishing this fanfic and not leaving it hanging, although I would have preferred a more slow and nice ending, an ending is better then dropping it. Secondly I would like to thank you for all your hard work!

The seraphim sounds a lot like the satellites of Dr. Vegapunk, if the MC isn't careful and they gain self conscious they might betray him in the future.

Just as I thought, the fishman became his weakness.

For a moment there I thought the MC would refuse directly and that would be great since the obvious plot line wouldn't be happening. Unfortunately the MC agreed to take the fishman under his name, meaning that when he goes against the world's government they would target the fisherman and he would have to go and protect them.

Thanks for the chapter, loved it! Hope you will keep up with the good work 🙂