Nice intro for first chapter and setting too, you really got Pandora's personality.
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Thanks, man! I never really knew how to write most of the characters and had a hard time writing them, so that's a huge compliment, Thanks!
Your welcome and don't worry I'll be reading your pick and add it into one of my favorites.
Suspicious_Box:Thanks, man! I never really knew how to write most of the characters and had a hard time writing them, so that's a huge compliment, Thanks!