Well the writing is excellent but if you’re writing about the second ninja war then nawaki’s death doesn’t make sense….. seems incorrect… I believe Dan and Nawaki die nearing the end of the second ninja war… so im confused about the timeline.
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GOSTARI hope nawaki livs many fanfics leave important world changing events the exact same to make writing easier, but that also reduces how interesting the world is
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dude even a random Google search tells that nawaki died in second war in the same year as dan, where did find it saying 6 years before war
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The 2nd shinobi war started 52 years after Konoha founded and Nawaki died 42 years after Konoha founded. - Found from Google
cereal_fisher_1194:dude even a random Google search tells that nawaki died in second war in the same year as dan, where did find it saying 6 years before war
I couldn't agree more, as if seeing a happy Tsunade who doesn't fall into alcoholism and has children wouldn't be a beautiful thing. As if the disappearance of the senju clan is something no one seems to want to reverse. It's sad and so redundant
DaoistRGOoG6:I hope nawaki livs many fanfics leave important world changing events the exact same to make writing easier, but that also reduces how interesting the world is