Well the writing is excellent but if you’re writing about the second ninja war then nawaki’s death doesn’t make sense….. seems incorrect… I believe Dan and Nawaki die nearing the end of the second ninja war… so im confused about the timeline.

Timeline is all messed up, Dan and Nawaki should be alive because they die towards the end of the second ninja war.

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This story is a copy of I Come To Change the World of Walking Dead you can find the MTL online but it’s a dropped novel around 300 chapters. Are you going to write the rest or dropping it

I think the author said this is a mix of all his favorite fanfic…. And he did give credit to other fanfic he just didn’t name which ones he copied from

I really want more realism novels instead of fantasy martial arts novel so tired of them. Bring back more urban and magical realism books!! And if your looking for not. Google search overpowered broadcast system... cool spoiler

Glad there’s a urban novel that’s not garbage. This is a good slice of life novel. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

This book is a dropped Chinese novel with a horrible sudden ending that doesn’t make sense.

I gave this novel a low rating mainly because this a dropped novel it’s just suddenly and randomly ends around 460+ chapter the story was going great then just dropped so don’t support unless you want to read a randomly sudden ending

Great story! It threw me off when the male main character became a Goddess, but way later you realize that he’s will make his own avatar and is only using the goddess as an alias to attract the male players. I’ve completed the 60 chapters and will say it worth unlocking. A+ so far in my view.

Other guys is right. Don’t f****n review if you haven’t read it with a 5 star.