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Joao_Pires
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The story is developing really well. Even though it is a cultivation novel, it doesn't have a brain dead MC nor is he a licking dog. __ The realms are well explained but I think the author could add a bit more description to their strenght (like how much weight they can carry, how powerfull are their attacks, how fast).___ The only bad point is the writting errors. They brake the flow and sometimes make difficult to understand the sentence ___ I recomend you to try to use a grammar cheker or ChatGPT (only need to write "correct grammar:", make a paragraph and them paste the whole chapter there) ___ I'm making these spaces because, from about 2 months, the app no longer lets me make paragraphs.

The Sovereign of True Immortality

Nansha

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Nansha
NanshaAutorNansha

NOOOOOO

Dark_07_Light:is it harem?
Joao_Pires
Joao_PiresLv4Joao_Pires

I read some more chapters and the author already showed how strong are the realms and the difference between them.

Nansha
NanshaAutorNansha

omg, thank you!!!

Joao_Pires:I read some more chapters and the author already showed how strong are the realms and the difference between them.
GifflarGod
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I'm going to start reading but is the romance towards his junior sister? is that the fml?

Nansha:omg, thank you!!!
Nansha
NanshaAutorNansha

No, it was like the essence of blood Brother and Sister. Their master is like their father.

GifflarGod:I'm going to start reading but is the romance towards his junior sister? is that the fml?
GifflarGod
GifflarGodLv14GifflarGod

Oh thank you!!! I hate the plot of junior sister being the fml

Nansha:No, it was like the essence of blood Brother and Sister. Their master is like their father.
Eternal_Shu
Eternal_ShuLv12Eternal_Shu

so no romance?🥺

Nansha:No, it was like the essence of blood Brother and Sister. Their master is like their father.
Nansha
NanshaAutorNansha

the romance, there are many romances in this book. However, I cannot find someone that fits his Junior Sister because she had two men, not related by blood but the Oath of the Dao. Yun Haoran had a lover and they are an interesting duo (I think?)

Eternal_Shu:so no romance?🥺
Eternal_Shu
Eternal_ShuLv12Eternal_Shu

nice I thought the dude had no one...lol hope they don't break up

Nansha:the romance, there are many romances in this book. However, I cannot find someone that fits his Junior Sister because she had two men, not related by blood but the Oath of the Dao. Yun Haoran had a lover and they are an interesting duo (I think?)
Dark_07_Light
Dark_07_LightLv4Dark_07_Light

is it harem?

Nansha:omg, thank you!!!
Dark_07_Light
Dark_07_LightLv4Dark_07_Light

then i will read it

Nansha:NOOOOOO