GifflarGod
Lv14
A Veteran Novel Reader, Perfectionist and The Bane of all Authors. I will call out every single grammar mistake, so beware.
2019-07-07 UnidoGlobal
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GifflarGod6 months agoRespondeu a CaptainBoyHolethat's not cowardice
- GifflarGod6 months agoComentou
hmm he might not be actual child of that family but an orphan adopted.. that would explain why the father doesn't teach as it is only taught to the bloodline
- GifflarGod6 months agoComentou
lvl*
- GifflarGod6 months agoComentou
bro what?
- GifflarGod6 months agoComentou
it can speak?
- GifflarGod6 months agoComentou
in this case he should be also emotional for the parents that died
- GifflarGod6 months agoComentou
maybe use "from the predecessor" (idk how to write that word" as the training wasn't from his past life
- GifflarGod6 months agoComentou
why not just call it earth..
- GifflarGod6 months agoComentou
olay i know it's a game world but this breaks the immersion while reading.. you could just say "they are dharma cultivators"
- GifflarGod6 months agoComentou
should be Realm