Review Detail of Arthur1234 in Court of Rebirth: The Conqueror (KnB)

I tried to portray his character as someone befitting of a conqueror. But I guess I'm doing a poor job of portraying his character...

I think it's perfect how you made him!

thanks man, I'm glad to hear that

well lol no

Para mí está bien, el protagonista apunta a algo mucho más alto que simplemente un torneo de secundaria. Su actitud coincide con la gran ambición que tiene a diferencia de akashi que tiene un personalidad de emperador sobre su vida y su equipo. Estás (por lo menos de mi parte) retratando correctamente a el protagonista, ya que, no es como akashi si no alguien con el que comparte similitudes pero al fin al cabo son distintos el uno del otro.

Nba?

I think he meant of the basketball world I dont think he means when he is with his friends and stuff

I agree conqueror is very dominating leader an attitude is feaking important just because he is the best the strongest is not nearly enough to be called The conqueror

It's okay. I think you did well on portraying how he dominates the basketball court when he uses his eyes. He's quite playful when playing before and didn't really fit the word conqueror, but he's not using his eyes back then so I think it's still reasonable. I think you just have to make him more dominating and merciless when he uses his Conqueror's Eyes while playing to make it a fitting title. The story is well written though, it's the best KnB fanfic I've read with no romance and harem stuff. It purely focuses on the MC getting stronger and the game. It's very good. You already did great when you decided to change the plot. I was really afraid that you'll follow the plot and lose in front of the power of friendship, but you did well on not making any compromises on that.

Is there any romance?