Nafriza_Arg17

Honestly, I've read this far, but the dialogue still feels unnatural, I thought it would be better from the start, and the use of POV, sometimes when it's POV mc, feels like 3rd POV

😭😭😭 my brain hurts, what is it, from the bus suddenly in class 😭 and many more. MC asks the teacher, then describes the atmosphere regarding the question, and suddenly direct introductions, no teacher answer, no description of time change, 😭😭

really a novel like this?

it seems like the system's punishment is the MC's future if he fails, it's more accurate to say it's the "consequence"For example, if you fail to defeat or kill someone who wants to kill you, the "consequence" of that is "death."

duh, that woman seems to have a big sin so the animals don't like her 😂😂

May I ask, whether the MC domain will be the domain of "Ten Shadow" or is it based on all the MC powers

It was only when these talented muggles entered Hogwarts that they discovered it was magic

MC doesn't know "Mana" right? Muggles in that world can't feel mana, what makes MC different, even those talented in magic don't know there is "Mana" they don't think about their strange abilities as magic

well authors, you know generally they will think "back in the past 1990" not another world, well unless they are crazy people who have too many books

??? author I want to ask, how does MC know he's not in his world? Did he go straight to the magic place here so he knew he wasn't in his world? if he was in the muggle world, he should have thought that he had only returned to the past and not another world