Review Detail of Maeve_Lindley in Grave borne Revenant

This is a really good concept, right off the bat it gives and air of mystery but i recommend reviewing your chapters a little more. I noticed a number of punctuation and formatting errors for example, everything a character says something (dialogue) you should have it start on a new line. same goes for thoughts they should be on their own new line. If you want further help/guidance I can gladly give pointers just let me know! (Part of a review swap)