Hi! I am Maeve from the UK. I have been writing seriously for about a year now. I also make and sell things I have crafted, check our my socials and website!
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thanks you... I missed that 😔
thank you so much :3
thank you i will try!
This is a really good concept, right off the bat it gives and air of mystery but i recommend reviewing your chapters a little more. I noticed a number of punctuation and formatting errors for example, everything a character says something (dialogue) you should have it start on a new line. same goes for thoughts they should be on their own new line. If you want further help/guidance I can gladly give pointers just let me know! (Part of a review swap)
Great prologue mentioning the Greek mythology accurately, Then the twist woah! Your chapters really pulled me in, I will defo be reading more! (Part of a review swap)
Great story. It really reminds me of the old stories i used to like to read, i think i will keep this one on my reading list! your story development and background development is great - i like how the 'stats' update with each completed action. keep going!
First few chapters really pull you in! I enjoyed reading the first three chapters and i think i will keep this on my reading list. I love the introduction to the family and how its a 'story' being told. great work!
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Who doesnt like being treated like a princess deep down