Review Detail of IOnlyEatDinner in Necromantic Gamer's Journey(DxD)

Writing quality of 3. Many spelling mistakes, grammatical errors, and the like.Story development of 1. Went from interesting gamer dxd fic, into an edgy r*pey fic with unnecessary bashing, one that I never expected considering the early chapters were fine, like what happened? seriously.Character design of 1. If it's a design choice to make the characters' characteristics worse than the original just to justify an edgy event for a seriously increasingly annoying main character, then it is what it is. I just can't justify giving this a higher score.Updating stability of 3, it's not a daily update, but it IS updating. World background of 3, well, it's mostly done well, the author does know the world of DxD, which is why it's frustrating to see characters being butchered for the sake of edgy "character" development, if you can even call it a development.