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Diegoa
DiegoaLv151yr
2023-06-25 13:10

This novel really caught me by surprise, and for me it has a lot of potential to be in the top 20 in the golden rankings if this novel gets contracted. I don’t even know how it doesn’t even have more views or more reviews because this novel has a lot of potential. The writing currently is great, and it improved over the 100 episodes. So, I am expecting to be great, and that’s why I put in 5 stars. The update stability is improving, that’s why I put in 4 stars, and if is consistent to the current pace that the author is going in updating his story, than in the future it may be in 5 stars. Story development I put it at 4 star, and in the beginning it started maybe a little boring and the characters were not that Interesting, but you manage to change my mind, and your characters are improving rapidly. So, in the future it may be 5 stars, but for now is 4 stars. Your character design are the most impressive thing about this novel for me. You manage to give me a clear description of what they look like and I am loving it. Your world background needs to improve, and now because Alex is going to find the hearts, I am seeing that your are going to introduce more background. But, one criticism that I have is that I don’t know what is the current structure of the empire. I don’t even know what are the names of the 12 families, and we are already in the 100 chapters. In my opinion, I think you should do a auxiliary chapter that includes all the information that we need because it’s easy to forget, and also explain the power system in that chapter because it took me some time to fully comprehend the power system, and even now I am not really sure that if what I understood is correct. Anyway, I hope that you can continue this novel because it has potential to be great and one of the best novels in webnovel. Keep up the good work!👍👍👍👍

Hunter of the Evernight

_DreamWeaver
4.4
610 Chs

Curtido por 6 pessoas

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Respostas8
_DreamWeaver
_DreamWeaverAutor

Thanks for the review, I appreciate your words.About the structure of the Empire, it would take some time for that to happen.For now, it's mostly going to be tidbits, I'd rather not want to infodump everything in one chapter and some aspects would be spoiler if I dropped it in an auxiliary chapter.But do not fret, the Empire would slowly be revealed and about the Power system, I'd create an auxiliary chapter for that soon enough.Sorry if I made it a bit too complicated, it was definitely not my intention.Once again thanks for the review and God bless. >⁠.⁠<

1yr
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_SeaBiscuit_
_SeaBiscuit_Lv4

Is this a fanfic?

_DreamWeaver:Thanks for the review, I appreciate your words.About the structure of the Empire, it would take some time for that to happen.For now, it's mostly going to be tidbits, I'd rather not want to infodump everything in one chapter and some aspects would be spoiler if I dropped it in an auxiliary chapter.But do not fret, the Empire would slowly be revealed and about the Power system, I'd create an auxiliary chapter for that soon enough.Sorry if I made it a bit too complicated, it was definitely not my intention.Once again thanks for the review and God bless. >⁠.⁠<
1yr
_DreamWeaver
_DreamWeaverAutor

Uhmm no, it's an original work. May I ask what work you feel mine is a fanfic of?

_SeaBiscuit_:Is this a fanfic?
1yr
_SeaBiscuit_
_SeaBiscuit_Lv4

I haven't read it yet but from the synopsis and name of the novel I thought it was a fanfic of Lord of mysteries.

_DreamWeaver:Uhmm no, it's an original work. May I ask what work you feel mine is a fanfic of?
1yr
_DreamWeaver
_DreamWeaverAutor

It has no connections to LOTM apart from both stories having a steampunk setting.

_SeaBiscuit_:I haven't read it yet but from the synopsis and name of the novel I thought it was a fanfic of Lord of mysteries.
1yr
1
THE_LOST_GOAT
THE_LOST_GOATLv13

will there be romance or harem just to be sure because I hate both

_DreamWeaver:It has no connections to LOTM apart from both stories having a steampunk setting.
1yr
1
_DreamWeaver
_DreamWeaverAutor

No romance or harem.

THE_LOST_GOAT:will there be romance or harem just to be sure because I hate both
1yr
5
Michael_Mitchel
Michael_MitchelLv11

and the Mc being an investigator. and the Lovecraftian elements. no accusations here, just similarities

_DreamWeaver:It has no connections to LOTM apart from both stories having a steampunk setting.
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The_Shadow_Author1
The_Shadow_Author1Lv4

intriguing story. Certainly worth the read especially for fans of Arcane and other magitech series. The characters are realistic and intriguing in many ways. The pacing is good and the world building is impeccable.

1yr

SSJ_T
SSJ_TLv13

good good good must read for those who enjoy mystery and lotm vibes a different and unique power system just read it u will be hooked up

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THE_LOST_GOAT
THE_LOST_GOATLv13

Spoiler de revelação

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Prashik_Jaware
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I like your world and other things but I hate the MC character. He is arrogant to the point of being blind. Too Overconfident even against his own ignorance. And nice/good to the point of making me uncomfortable.

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zakaria_f
zakaria_fLv15

Spoiler de revelação

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Prashik_Jaware
Prashik_JawareLv11

Why do I keep finding novels like this. I gave a review before but I want to update more I just feel sick about 1000yr old people turning docile in the first meeting with MC and accepting him as his master. While the MC becomes their boss as easily as eating or drinking. Really it feels like I am watching a cartoon or anime with this kind of plot setting. Moreover the MC behaves like its normal like he owns everything and success is but guaranteed.

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CreationGODBlack
CreationGODBlackLv12

I love it so you better Finish it 🫵🏾 or else....but you keep doing the good work savvy

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Hunter1105
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i really like this kind of genre. this one very well written and has a lot going for it. you'll never get bored or will any character feel repetitive. this has the potential to become one of the best in the platform.

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Klein_MorettiGod
Klein_MorettiGodLv2

Well, I finally caught up with the novel, I really don't have much to say, it's just wonderful and it hooked me from the first chapter, when I got to a certain chapter, I thought I was going to leave it because something happened that I didn't like, but I decided to continue reading because I had faith in it, and that's how I am, I don't regret continuing reading, I thought the novel was going to get worse, but it has completely exceeded all my expectations, it has improved with each chapter, and I liked the development of alex and nadia, there are still many mysteries to discover in this wonderful novel, and I want to think that this is just the beginning, I want to think that there is still a long way to go to finish the novel, I know it can be hard work for our beloved author, but cheer up You can author hahaha, the novel deserves much more recognition, the background of the characters is incredible, and that the complete backgrounds have not been shown, the story is also wonderful, incredible mc. Also the secondary characters, both good and bad, are amazing. This novel is definitely an amazing hidden gem on this platform. It became one of my favorite novels with only 174 chapters so far. I hope the author doesn't drop it. Don't ruin this wonderful novel, keep it up author with this amazing work, some may think that I am going too far with this opinion that I am giving, but I am not. Beware, I'm being completely honest, try this amazing hidden gem on this platform with mostly trashy novels. Good job author🎩 (author, increase the chapter rate please🙏🤑)

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