Review Detail of XXGSWAI in MMORPG: Rise of the Primordial Godsmith

Okay, the MMORPG is a little overdone by now. However, the way the author approached this is something I haven't seen so far. The concept of this novel is great. Now for the criticism, the writing quality is good. Same with the update stability, but when it comes to the story? I kind of hate it, it's an MMORPG in the title. Now with the synopsis combined with the first chapter, I thought players were going to actually be a part of the story. I'm assuming it is, but if it's not the way you opened up the book is pretty much clickbait at this point. I think you should rewrite the synopsis as well as chapter one, and you should also re-write the title to reflect the mc living as an NPC. Now if that's not the main focus of the book, then overall this is terrible, there is way too much filler, the pacing of the book is far too slow, and I don't feel connected to these NPCs you're spending dozens of chapters developing with. Writing quality 4/5 Updates 5/5 Story 3/5 Charecter 4/5