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DetachedDreamer
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2023-02-01 06:39

I love Elder scrolls and any fanfics about them. this one has an awesome origin and I'm excited to see how the story develops. However, every chapter is about 40 to 60% just an info dump about the history. it was nice at first and still appreciable but there hasn't been really much actual story. 19 chapters in and it feels like it should only be the 3rd or 4th chapter for the MC. If this changes I'll definitely revise my review for the better but this and the update speed are lacking at the moment. other than that, the story is topnotch and id recommend anyone to read this even non elder scrolls enthusiasts as the info supplied every chapter should fill you in on what you are missing.

Skyrim: The Snow Prince (an Elder Scrolls Fanfic)

Knight_Riku
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53 Chs

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Knight_Riku
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the foe the review, u should be ready to revise ur review then cause only about 3 more information dump Chapters or maybe even 1 left and then u can proceed with a story that is 1000 chapters long and as of now I am picking up on the story update speed by doing 1 Chapter a day at the very least. tbh, 20 chapters of info dump at the start is much better for new readers to set a foundation as well as explaining the Thalmor plot and some racial lore since barely any players actually know them cause of Elder Scrolls massive lore. hope I answered any doubts and questions u might have had

1yr
DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv14

definitely, ill revise my review for sure thanks for the info!

Knight_Riku:the foe the review, u should be ready to revise ur review then cause only about 3 more information dump Chapters or maybe even 1 left and then u can proceed with a story that is 1000 chapters long and as of now I am picking up on the story update speed by doing 1 Chapter a day at the very least. tbh, 20 chapters of info dump at the start is much better for new readers to set a foundation as well as explaining the Thalmor plot and some racial lore since barely any players actually know them cause of Elder Scrolls massive lore. hope I answered any doubts and questions u might have had
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StrangeGod
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Knight_Riku
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let's be real, u are gonna put five stars for this fic, I am a the most shameless author you have ever encountered to even be saying this in the first place. so why don't you leave a review, yeah???? . . . . . . .

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thezerozero0
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not really seeing right now but just the hope that the fic could go on, you dont see much elder scrolss fictions and most of all not one on the snow elves,that explains my review so hoping This gem can truly shine best of luck to you author (the elder scrolls fans must rise up)

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Keira_Kok
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I feel like the author is going for a slow-progress storylines because each chapters seem to be getting short that i have to move to the next chap. Got bored easily since there's nothing interesting going on that i skip a few chapters just to proceed faster. Fine but could do better.

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dictator_dan
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Great read and looking forward to more chapters.

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GrimAce58
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hot flaming garbage cant even read it withought half of the useless lore anyone who played the game would have being shoved down your throat

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Bogdan7
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This review is for the promise of this ff having 500-1500 chapters ...and a year later there are 40 chapters? If the author starts updating regularely (more than 1 chap/month) i will delete this....

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Great story, lots of fun to read however I will say that there are quite a few typos but they don't really effect the overall reading experience.

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HolyDreamer
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So far this seems pretty good!! Don’t drop this author!!! Keep going!!! And if you want to make your life easier use grammarly!!

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