Everything is great, but there are a few problems. Like MC is a bit careless with his secret identity (which blows up in his face) and the romance could've been better. I liked that MC kills all the worst villains he comes across. And him becoming the 'Merchant Of Death' in DC.
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LIKEOh! I have suggestion, like he can be chosen by the spectre. MC's personality would fit with the spectre (the vengeance thing) and it would keep the 'green' theme going. It would also give him quiet a power up.
Hmmm, I can't let that happen because I'm not sure beings like the spectre can still understand what it means to be human and behave like one. I do not want a MC that just floats around being all powerful but does not have the ability to love and have the joys of life. It's my personal belief that being like those people is a sad life. All this doesn't mean the MC won't become freakishly powerful though. I mean in the future he would be able to go toe to toe with the likes of darkseid.
GodOfHeroes:Oh! I have suggestion, like he can be chosen by the spectre. MC's personality would fit with the spectre (the vengeance thing) and it would keep the 'green' theme going. It would also give him quiet a power up.image
The cover needs a better pic to attract more readers. This cover looks bland. My opinion though, keep up the good work.
Dark_Path_007:Hmmm, I can't let that happen because I'm not sure beings like the spectre can still understand what it means to be human and behave like one. I do not want a MC that just floats around being all powerful but does not have the ability to love and have the joys of life. It's my personal belief that being like those people is a sad life. All this doesn't mean the MC won't become freakishly powerful though. I mean in the future he would be able to go toe to toe with the likes of darkseid.
I'll change it when I find something better. Thanks for the heads up.
GRANDMAESTA_30:The cover needs a better pic to attract more readers. This cover looks bland. My opinion though, keep up the good work.
You are welcomed.
Dark_Path_007:I'll change it when I find something better. Thanks for the heads up.
Oh here we go
Dark_Path_007:Hmmm, I can't let that happen because I'm not sure beings like the spectre can still understand what it means to be human and behave like one. I do not want a MC that just floats around being all powerful but does not have the ability to love and have the joys of life. It's my personal belief that being like those people is a sad life. All this doesn't mean the MC won't become freakishly powerful though. I mean in the future he would be able to go toe to toe with the likes of darkseid.
