Review Detail of Rogue_Deity in Revelations @end of the world

the writing style is detailed and logical. the world background is interesting and hooks the reader's attention. just the paragraphs are a bit lengthy and could be simplified to refine an even more immersive version of the content. overall the story development is good and has a high potential to create a masterpiece. just give it a try, who might know you would be hooked in the first chapter.