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crinix
crinixLv132yr
2022-06-02 01:11

it was truly a great fanfic, but somewhere after 120 chapters it got repetitive like he goes to new singularities deal with it comes back and summon new servents that he isn't going to use as apparently he can only take 6 to 7 summons with him, like why are you even summoning them you already have enough after summoning then he goes to new singularities and repeat the process with a mixture of 1 or 2 filler chapters that is mostly info dump, and (my personal opinion) that awful romance that you force on a character that is undead and can't feel emotions because whenever he feels intense emotions he'll instantly forced calm by his skill so it doesn't make sense of the romance, and clearly everyone knows that he's a undead and can't reciprocate their feelings they still fell in love with or do i say the meat bag he's wearing. it was truly a great fanfic but now i cant find myself to continue reading it.

Grand Foreigner

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Christ_Apostle
Christ_ApostleLv4

Ainz is so weak a lot of useless info just to make the chapter longer what a trash fanfic .........,...............................................

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Argomi
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Please change the flow of the fanfic, you're already approaching a hundred chapters yet nothing seems to amuse me at this point. MC doesn't change, either in personality, power, or appearance. The fanfic still goes like the original Grand Order. MC is well. . . MC yet nothing truly releases his true intent. Like sure, MC is somewhat of a coward who is often misunderstood and still thinks of the current world as Yggdrasil. . . A mf game in his past life. Doesn't MC suppose to develop new emotions throughout the story? MC feels emotionless and forced to interact with others. Interactions between characters are also less because the majority of the chapter is filled with information garbage that literally almost every reader knows. If the author can't really change the whole flow of the fanfic. . . Then I'm sorry but this fanfic would go to the garbage dump.

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Woshi
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Honestly, this is one of the more well developed and well written fanfictions I could find. This statement is not inclusive to overlord fanfictions but for every fanfiction I've read so far. The author stays true to the personalities of the characters, especially Ainz, and gives you a sense of anticipation and suspense for what's coming next. There are more chapters on fanfiction so you should head over there and read the story. If you like the story be sure to support the author! Im pretty sure full access to chapters is only $2 a month which is a steal for the quality provided.

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