Review Detail of JinnaDennis in Marvel Re-Loki

Item: Marvel Re-Loki
Rating: 4.4

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JinnaDennisLv12yrJinnaDennis

The Author narrative is distracting(cutting off the story in awkward spots) BUT if that is removed, the story is well written. I like the twist on power.

Marvel Re-Loki

Aniki1

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JinnaDennisLv1JinnaDennis

That would help. And I understand. Everyone writes differently. Keep up the good work. :)

Aniki1:Thanks for your reply. I am a rather anti-social person in real life and act plastic (Unlike the real me) so I tend to show more of m thoughts, but I can put them at the end if it disrupts the story.

2yr

Aniki1AutorAniki1

Thanks for your reply. I am a rather anti-social person in real life and act plastic (Unlike the real me) so I tend to show more of m thoughts, but I can put them at the end if it disrupts the story.

2yr