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LIST OF NOVELS- OCB contracted with Good Novel *The Ocean Dragon's Bride(fantasy romance-reincarnation novel)^^^ *Fated 8(GOT7 fanfic romance) *The Tin Lion(BLR18+) *Blue Pyramyd (KPOP Crime/Romance)

2021-02-05 UnidoGlobal
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  • JinnaDennis
    JinnaDennis2yr
    Respondeu a deszy_7

    hehe I will update soon.

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    The Tin Lion
    LGBT+ · JinnaDennis
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  • JinnaDennis
    JinnaDennis2yr
    Respondeu a leoreview2

    I have an editor but thanks for the 5 STARs review!!! I appreciate it more than you know.

    Blue Pyramyd
    Urbano · JinnaDennis
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  • JinnaDennis
    JinnaDennis2yr
    Comentou

    THE ** is JB's name!!! I have to put a space between them....;([img=faceslap]

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    Fated 8
    Música e bandas · JinnaDennis
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  • JinnaDennis
    JinnaDennis2yr
    Respondeu a ArcadiaDouglass

    Thank you. Yes, the reincarnation is still going to be added but I wanted to reorganize. Thanks for the review!! I am updating daily now that I feel better.

    The Ocean Dragon's Bride
    Fantasia · JinnaDennis
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  • JinnaDennis
    JinnaDennis2yr
    Respondeu a Omahakhan

    Hope you keep reading. Thanks for the review!

    The Ocean Dragon's Bride
    Fantasia · JinnaDennis
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  • JinnaDennis
    JinnaDennis2yr
    Respondeu a lingspiration

    I am trying to edit the formal and informal better. Thanks for the review!

    The Ocean Dragon's Bride
    Fantasia · JinnaDennis
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  • JinnaDennis
    JinnaDennis2yr
    Respondeu a Fritziest

    Thank you! Hope you will read more when I update!

    The Ocean Dragon's Bride
    Fantasia · JinnaDennis
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  • JinnaDennis
    JinnaDennis2yr
    Comentou

    Vertigo makes it hard to read! :( Just with a few paragraphs your world is amazing! I am going to absorb this one so give me sometime to review.

    Ch 1 Erlem
    The Black Dawn
    Fantasia · EvanBardiel
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  • JinnaDennis
    JinnaDennis2yr
    Postado

    The story is good. I like the conflicts of the different family members/gangs. I think the characters need more. I get the personalities but why are they that way? For now a 4.6. I will update this later after more chapters are written! Good job Author!

    Wildest Fires
    Adolescente · Fritziest
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  • JinnaDennis
    JinnaDennis2yr
    Comentou

    should this be "for every woman?" I think I may be confused:)

    People say that there's a man for every man in this world. I don't buy that. I never did, though I almost did. I know things are rough but the only thing that keeps me going is the thought of having to be a man for yourself. Never resting, never giving in.
    Wildest Fires
    Adolescente · Fritziest
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  • JinnaDennis
    JinnaDennis2yr
    Postado

    PILOT READ #09 for the week of 7/17/2021 Have had bad vertigo. Hoping to update to chapter 8 tomorrow. :) ~PinkBunnyMilk Editing in progress- will not affect the story.

    The Ocean Dragon's Bride
    Fantasia · JinnaDennis
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  • JinnaDennis
    JinnaDennis2yr
    Respondeu a White_lotus1897

    Thank you for your review!! :) Writing today! Chapter will be up soon.

    The Ocean Dragon's Bride
    Fantasia · JinnaDennis
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  • JinnaDennis
    JinnaDennis2yr
    Respondeu a Aniki1

    That would help. And I understand. Everyone writes differently. Keep up the good work. :)

    Marvel Re-Loki
    Anime e quadrinhos · Aniki1
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  • JinnaDennis
    JinnaDennis2yr
    Postado

    I feel the pain she is going through. This is a good story about betrayal and love. Can't wait to read more. Make sure to edit each chapter before publishing. There are spelling and punctuation mistakes. But the story is easily understandable.

    ISLAND OF MEMORIES
    Adolescente · AJONAFXX
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  • JinnaDennis
    JinnaDennis2yr
    Comentou

    I felt that.

    Ch 6 CHAPTER 7
    ISLAND OF MEMORIES
    Adolescente · AJONAFXX
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  • JinnaDennis
    JinnaDennis2yr
    Comentou

    grrrrrrr

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    ISLAND OF MEMORIES
    Adolescente · AJONAFXX
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  • JinnaDennis
    JinnaDennis2yr
    Comentou

    love the rich guy/poor girl troupe!

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    ISLAND OF MEMORIES
    Adolescente · AJONAFXX
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  • JinnaDennis
    JinnaDennis2yr
    Comentou

    Leo..such a great name. :)

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    ISLAND OF MEMORIES
    Adolescente · AJONAFXX
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  • JinnaDennis
    JinnaDennis2yr
    Comentou

    Since you have one chapter, I will hold my review. The beginning seems fairly sound. It does need some editing, such things as punctuation and sentence structure BUT that being said, i like the set up for the beginning and hope the plot takes off! Good job! :) I will add to my library to read more then review deeper in.

    Ch 1 Rebirth.
    Stop following me, Mafia king
    Urbano · White_lotus1897
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  • JinnaDennis
    JinnaDennis2yr
    Comentou

    love the "stuck in a novel" troupe

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    Stop following me, Mafia king
    Urbano · White_lotus1897
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