Review Detail of EphemeralKaos in Epic Of The Second Strongest Demonic Blade King

To: Author The concept was good and interesting but the execution was disappointing The main things that got me to drop this were that You over explain things, You under explain things, The story was rushed and The emotions didn’t feel realistic Partly because it was rushed but also because it didn’t feel like you had a good enough grasp of the emotions you’re trying to bring to the table I guess you could say And of course the Slight but annoying grammar errors I’m not trying to say that you don’t have talent or that you should give up I’m just saying that this could be better and that it was disappointing