Review Detail of TDMMyst in A readable Naruto fanfic. (Naruto, The Gamer, OC)

The writing quality does not disappoint, as the title says. Unlike most other novels on this site you can actually read this story, without instinctively reaching for the closest bottle of bleach to rub into your eyes. Update rate is stable and has been on a daily frequency for the last week, don't know if it will remain that way. Story developement is too slow for my tastes. After 10 chapters Cole got a few abilities and brainstormed uses for them, but that's it. If it goes on like this we'll be at chapter 100 when the chunin exams start. Character Design is just wow. Cole doesn't say the right thing all the time, conversations don't always go his way, but he shows emotional depth and understands his mistakes. He's a normal human so to speak. On World Background, come on, it's Naruto. Really great overall.