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Mercey
MerceyLv122yr
2021-11-15 06:54

The writing is not bad and the beginning of the book is fun to read.[img=recommend] Sadly, as go go further with the chapters author cuts down the interaction with the old supporting characters. Which is like, fine, there are lot of bad examples of this. But in the beginning you can see the interaction between family members and then there is no such thing whatsoever. The grandpa didn't even tell the others in his family where he went, and now the visiting family members suddenly vanished because they are busy, even the kids. I get it, he is now a bit stronger, but with the apperance of spacial cracks, they should show some semblance of concern, no? I'm not talking about backstories of the guild master and his grandchildren. They are just piling up one on top of another. What do they know and what don't is a good question. Then there's the system taking it's sweet time to upgrade, which feels like eternety with a change of pace from the author. Is it even reasonable to hold a tournament on such a short notice? With the time it took on the road, you would think it would finish already, but no... I hope for a reasonable story development, but I don't have much ecpectations.

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Mercey
MerceyLv12

There's a ton of misspelings, sorry. I was just genuinely upset with the story development.

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