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wthLv132yr
2021-11-09 12:27

its sad the novel was good the idea was good then the usual happened with CN novels and went from 4.5 to 3.0 good until chapter 138 or so , then the author for some strange reason threw out of the window a good part of the plot and the worldbuilding he made so far, grandmaster strongest realm so far? nah scratch that, lets make them weak and completely forget about martial warriors, lets make this all about the ability users and forget about what we said before about martial grandmaster being the strongest, family? lets completely forget about them, who cares about them anyway im way too strong by now anyway and they can't catch up so puff and they're gone. then the author in some chapters remember what he said and try to patch it saying "well he was a mortal before...and he dindt truly know about the real strong people" etc, and well the family? lets pretend theyre gone we cant patch it up anyway.

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MysteriaFollower
MysteriaFollowerLv3

The story became boring when world peace quest became his 1st priority, the mc became senile and got dragged around by secret organization without him realizing that he is being used.

wth
wthLv13

nah the author made him an idiot, the somewhat smart mc from the beginning doesnt match to the current mc, and yeah the story dragged out with the secret organization stuff

MysteriaFollower:The story became boring when world peace quest became his 1st priority, the mc became senile and got dragged around by secret organization without him realizing that he is being used.
feifei030
feifei030Lv1

Taoists practice in this life, and Buddhism practice in the afterlife! The Tao is on this shore, the Buddha is on the other shore, and the man is in the middle! The spirit boat is not on this shore, not on the other shore, not in the middle! ..https://sourl.cn/ksLGZq

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