Item: Why Did I Become the Villainess?
Rating: 4.8

Leigh_GreenLv13yr

2021-09-30 04:52

Beautiful plot with unexpected unique twist. Flowy writing style. Wonderful story development. Interesting characters with surprises in store. It’s interesting to find the author herself playing the character of the villainess inside her novel. That would help her gain insight and deeper understanding of the villainess.

Why Did I Become the Villainess?

pshyyyy

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459 Chs

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pshyyyyAuthor

Thank you for your review. I’m glad you like my story 😊

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