Item: Why Did I Become the Villainess?
Rating: 4.8
Author: calfikydra

calfikydraLv104yr

2021-04-08 00:44

The idea behind this novel is incredible! It's very creative and fun to read, and i don't think i've read a novel with such a plot before. The only thing that bothers me, is the grammatical errors. There's a lot of incorrect use of words, but besides that, the story is great! I recommend that you spend some time, reading through your writing, to catch the misspellings and errors. Other than that, i like it! Keep up the good work, author. <3

Why Did I Become the Villainess?

pshyyyy

4.4

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Liked by 3 people

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pshyyyyAuthor

Thank you. 😊 I am actually aware with my mistakes. I update two chapters a day so I don’t really have time to correct it. Although I already have alloted a day to check my grammar issues. Anyways, thank you for your review. I really appreciate it. 😊

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