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calfikydra
calfikydraLv103yr
2021-04-08 00:44

The idea behind this novel is incredible! It's very creative and fun to read, and i don't think i've read a novel with such a plot before. The only thing that bothers me, is the grammatical errors. There's a lot of incorrect use of words, but besides that, the story is great! I recommend that you spend some time, reading through your writing, to catch the misspellings and errors. Other than that, i like it! Keep up the good work, author. <3

Why Did I Become the Villainess?

pshyyyy
4.4
459 Chs

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pshyyyy
pshyyyyAuthor

Thank you. 😊 I am actually aware with my mistakes. I update two chapters a day so I don’t really have time to correct it. Although I already have alloted a day to check my grammar issues. Anyways, thank you for your review. I really appreciate it. 😊

3yr
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Nightsummer20
Nightsummer20Lv13

I like the way in which the author has mixed her original and unique ideas in a transmigration story. The plotline is good and smooth so far and I'm liking it. Can't wait to read more! Good work, author!

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Mmimi_San
Mmimi_SanLv2

Highly recommended everyone. 😍😍😍 The storyline is so promising and it made me really excited. It's has different vibes from other villaines story making it more unique. I can't wait for another update to come.❤

3yr
pragatit70
pragatit70Lv1

I think it's very different from the books I've read earlier related to transmitting to a story book. you will know when you read it and it's unique too and how our heroine cope with the overall situation is cool too All the best author

3yr
GiveMeYourFromage
GiveMeYourFromageLv1

Pros: Original, Intriguing, un-sure ending. Cons: Grammar & spelling mistakes, clichés, repatition,(ie. obsesion w/ gay men’s love. Hope the actual author doesn’t fetishize bl.), weak FL, no people of colour.

3yr
silent_walker
silent_walkerLv3

First start with writing quality. it's clear, easy to read. sometimes it's more clear than its needs to be. overall I find it better than few of the contracted authors'. You get the clear idea of the tone of the story reading the first few chapters. And it's described well. The only problem that I could pick is the same I found myself most problem with-- show don't tell. there's good work in telling the back story but it would be great if you show their innermost feelings and physical reaction. overall it looks promising. Good Day writing....

3yr
yrish1
yrish1Lv1

I really like the story so far. It’s quite unique than most transmigration or tine traveling story I’ve read. I also like how the fl is the villainess. I’m actually looking forward on how the story will progress. I just hope this will have a good ending. Also, thank you for updating daily. I appreciate it.

3yr
yu_chan_desu
yu_chan_desuLv2

i love that the main character isn't the stereotypical girl who thinks like the rest of the crowd and is determined to follow her dream.. she has a unique mind and the plot is pretty interesting.. kudos to the author and i hope your novel goes well!

3yr
Tengu_San
Tengu_SanLv11

Interesting story and creativity! I don't know if author is a native English speaker, but there are some grammar errors that also a non-native speaker like me picked up quite easily. Keep it up and improve yourself! Best of luck ;)

3yr
Leigh_Green
Leigh_GreenLv1

Beautiful plot with unexpected unique twist. Flowy writing style. Wonderful story development. Interesting characters with surprises in store. It’s interesting to find the author herself playing the character of the villainess inside her novel. That would help her gain insight and deeper understanding of the villainess.

3yr
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