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Etiger789
Etiger789Lv154yr
2020-08-04 22:22

Writing quality isent unreadable but isent great either. It's only on 3 chapters sooo I'll only give it a 2. Not liking the development. Sheild Can't track down a master of illusions loki but can track down a master of illusions plus ninja within a space of an hour. And an uchiha ninja on par with madara. Ye, no. How the hell did they even bug the place and why dident he notice. A Ninja on par with madara wouldn't just let his gaurd down so easily and just go on a random date the first fucking hour he got there. I know he isent madara so he won't act like madara, but in the end he's still a ninja. A pathetic one as far as I've read. Tho I could be wrong and he may of done it on purpose. But that's a huge maybe. Charachter is madaras brother OC. And the background is marvel. Weather it's the cinimatic universe or the comic universe I still don't know. Will delete this review after 15 or more chapters and make a new assesment after reading.

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Ezukejyll
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No need, this fanfic won't be a good read past 3 chapters with all the secret spilling he is making his mc do. Within a day Shield will have come up with a way to kill him and hydra definitely will try to make him a slave. Anything author does from now is pointless because he already depicted his Mc as even more stupid than Naruto.

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