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I would like to know where the heck is the plot of your story. I only read about the original from Bell's P.O.V. and sometimes the f@cklife of the O.C. There is no M.c. here only Bell.
Celestials journey
Etiger789
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Sigh,seriously if you hadn't read the synthesis, alot of the plot will be of danmanchi,it will be all the same and it would stay like that until bell reaches level 2 that's when I was going to focus more on Noah and his pov. And if you don't like the novel just don't read it why are you complaining to me when I've written it clearly that it was going to follow the original plot.so next time please read the synthesis and know what you getting into before complaing whats already been said and repeated over 20 times.
Isn’t this boring . Having the original Mc as A second MC in a fiction always makes it boring in my opinion.
Etiger789:Sigh,seriously if you hadn't read the synthesis, alot of the plot will be of danmanchi,it will be all the same and it would stay like that until bell reaches level 2 that's when I was going to focus more on Noah and his pov. And if you don't like the novel just don't read it why are you complaining to me when I've written it clearly that it was going to follow the original plot.so next time please read the synthesis and know what you getting into before complaing whats already been said and repeated over 20 times.