Etiger789

Are you using gpt for this whole novel.

do you have no other way to write that, you use "Intresting" waaaaaaay to much.

man, why is every so author using chat gpt now.

She just poisoned you moments ago and you're fuc**** dumb enough to drink something else she offered...

With what permits, has he had the trucks inspected, fitted, how are the machines still working, and how much is he selling items for. what's the menu, how does someone who barely ever cooked not think to hire a chef. So many things have been skipped. I don't know what to think, but if I read he forgives his family and wants his girlfriend back, I'm out.

Why would he want to help someone that's been nothing but Rude, distrusting basically down right racist to him. Really after helping his people he's still being like that.

Is this really all he does, he doesn't seem as badass as everyone tells me Jack reacher is. Not when he's in shootouts or anything. Besides the two times the historian was useless, and he's been hardly using Charlie puth to make himself money, or used his knowledge to potentially do anything with his knowledge of earth. Honestly besides his interactions with The captain which I like everthing else about it is boring.

thanks for the chapter

lu zhe: I fell a disturbance in the force. - Pocket hunting Dimension