Review Detail of Passerby_Venne in I can't use chakra

Very interesting fanfiction. An mc in Naruto world without chakra? Cool idea. The pace is good. Story wise, It's good. However this novel is not without flaws. The most prominent one in the beginning is the wrong usage of the words 'she, he, herself, himself, her and his'. The grammatical errors do not subside, however that is something that can be forgiven since the story is good. There is one flaw that I found slightly odd. The mc is reincarnated, but he still thinks like, well Sasuke did when he was 12. It's alright that the Mc is more of a introvert, one that doesn't speak often or is simply cold. But when Mc acts bad tempered and moody when people try to be nice to him, he acts like a child. And considering Sasukes past and age it can be forgiven and understood, but Mc is mentally a grownup when he loses his adoptive mother. And should not act like Sasuke. I understand keeping people at arms length since he's afraid of losing people again. But not start throwing fists as soon as someone jokes with him or when someone tries to be kind a he gives a cold answer with a cold look. Dude that's just rude. So I'm split between reading this awesome idea of a story and this annoying childish mc. But that's a personal opinion and everybody that like's original Naruto fanfics should give this a try unless you hate grammatical errors. 6.9/10 stars from me.