Review Detail of URMOM2343 in Rogue Immortal: Immortal Rise From The Coffin, Back To Zero.
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This is more of a comedy and retarded novel about an immortal who lets his wife be ****ed by the headmaster of the school. The element of cultivation is completely gone after the mc's cultivation being sealed. The mc's woman is 16 for fks sake. Even at the latest chapter 33, the mc has not bothered to cultivate and the system is the same arrogant retard system that made the mc have erectile dysfunction for being bad to the system. The English is not that good either. The mc quickly starts acting like a Japanese anime pervert mc after having his cultivation sealed and watches his wife get fingered by another woman. I don't know how people rated this 5\5 in the story category. The novel loses the main focus which is the cultivation and quickly goes full pervert. Nothing great. The mc's woman is 16, again, pedo. The mc is supposed to be immortal but behaves like a 15 yr old Japanese pervert anime protagonist.
Rogue Immortal: Immortal Rise From The Coffin, Back To Zero.
DrunkenShadow
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lmao, not all people are into lesbian play like you. Lmao, I have read a **** ton of novels in the past 3 years and opened a new account here. I read the 33 chapters o I don't write incorrect reviews, You seem like a really defensive guy and I know if I write a review without reading all the chapters you will start crying about how I reviewed without reading all the chapters. You think mc letting his wife fked by another man is bad and letting a women fingering her is ok? Your head must be fked up.
DrunkenShadow:Awesome, *****d by headmaster? you talk like MC let his wife *****d by another man. Great review. and your Reading Status: C0, you actually read 33 chapters with dissatisfaction? really great. You are the real Hero.
If you cannot answer the question you don't need to act like a puss and write " your reading status C : 0 " I read novels in novel updates unlike you where the authors can actually take criticism. Lmao you didn't even have answers for my reviews and you went to my reading status. I have seen many other authors like you only want people to write reviews like they are your friend like " you can improve, more more " shi.t like that. Don't go crying about my status and give a valid reply to my review if you can.
DrunkenShadow:Awesome, *****d by headmaster? you talk like MC let his wife *****d by another man. Great review. and your Reading Status: C0, you actually read 33 chapters with dissatisfaction? really great. You are the real Hero.
DrunkenShadow:Awesome, *****d by headmaster? you talk like MC let his wife *****d by another man. Great review. and your Reading Status: C0, you actually read 33 chapters with dissatisfaction? really great. You are the real Hero.
shut the **** up, defensive? I get offended when ppl like you give a half-assed comments. immortal let his wife ****ed up? forget about others it even make me sick. I let that woman **** her because he will use her to **** that immortal, got it?
URMOM2343:lmao, not all people are into lesbian play like you. Lmao, I have read a **** ton of novels in the past 3 years and opened a new account here. I read the 33 chapters o I don't write incorrect reviews, You seem like a really defensive guy and I know if I write a review without reading all the chapters you will start crying about how I reviewed without reading all the chapters. You think mc letting his wife fked by another man is bad and letting a women fingering her is ok? Your head must be fked up.
URMOM2343:lmao, not all people are into lesbian play like you. Lmao, I have read a **** ton of novels in the past 3 years and opened a new account here. I read the 33 chapters o I don't write incorrect reviews, You seem like a really defensive guy and I know if I write a review without reading all the chapters you will start crying about how I reviewed without reading all the chapters. You think mc letting his wife fked by another man is bad and letting a women fingering her is ok? Your head must be fked up.
URMOM2343:It seems like you only write novels to boost your self ago, really great. You are the real hero
I don't mind you criticizing my story. anyone who saw ur comment ''immortal let his wife *****d by headmaster'' thinks it was a man and quit reading it. who won't feel sick reading it? you ****i*'g uy wife and someone fu*"k ur wife has a huge difference. u r reading from 3 years, i'm reading from 7 years.
URMOM2343:If you cannot answer the question you don't need to act like a puss and write " your reading status C : 0 " I read novels in novel updates unlike you where the authors can actually take criticism. Lmao you didn't even have answers for my reviews and you went to my reading status. I have seen many other authors like you only want people to write reviews like they are your friend like " you can improve, more more " shi.t like that. Don't go crying about my status and give a valid reply to my review if you can.
Half-assed your mom. The things I have stated are pure facts. Why don't you shut the **** up? You are the only retard who won't feel sick by seeing his wife get fingered by another women
DrunkenShadow:shut the **** up, defensive? I get offended when ppl like you give a half-assed comments. immortal let his wife ****ed up? forget about others it even make me sick. I let that woman **** her because he will use her to **** that immortal, got it?
you know how to read, don't you? I said headmaster not a fkin man. Bitch retard if you can't read go back to school
DrunkenShadow:you said like another men *****d his wife infront of him. *****ng two woman at a time is messed up?
DrunkenShadow:shut the **** up, defensive? I get offended when ppl like you give a half-assed comments. immortal let his wife ****ed up? forget about others it even make me sick. I let that woman **** her because he will use her to **** that immortal, got it?
are you retard? I said to clarify that headmaster as women, I'm not asking for your likes and dislikes.
URMOM2343:Half-assed your mom. The things I have stated are pure facts. Why don't you shut the **** up? You are the only retard who won't feel sick by seeing his wife get fingered by another women
even though you have read novels for 7 years you are still a bit.ch who can't stand bad reviews. Half-assed? Fuk off. Most of the comments are from your friends since no one could bother giving a bad review to a brain fked author like you.
DrunkenShadow:I don't mind you criticizing my story. anyone who saw ur comment ''immortal let his wife *****d by headmaster'' thinks it was a man and quit reading it. who won't feel sick reading it? you ****i*'g uy wife and someone fu*"k ur wife has a huge difference. u r reading from 3 years, i'm reading from 7 years.
URMOM2343:you know how to read, don't you? I said headmaster not a fkin man. Bitch retard if you can't read go back to school
seems like your brain is a little underdeveloped. You said that I wrote a review about the headmaster being a man, i didn't. I said that I never fking wrote **** about the headmaster being a man you fking retard. How can you not understand that? Were you brain fked by a donkey or smth?
DrunkenShadow:are you retard? I said to clarify that headmaster as women, I'm not asking for your likes and dislikes.
frnds? retard I just wrote them to push my novel, why frnds say I am his frnd when reviewing? Idon't even need to do that.
URMOM2343:even though you have read novels for 7 years you are still a bit.ch who can't stand bad reviews. Half-assed? Fuk off. Most of the comments are from your friends since no one could bother giving a bad review to a brain fked author like you.
haha, what the fu*k are you even talking? lol do you even understand what u r talking? everyone would think that headmaster is a women by reading ur comment?
URMOM2343:seems like your brain is a little underdeveloped. You said that I wrote a review about the headmaster being a man, i didn't. I said that I never fking wrote **** about the headmaster being a man you fking retard. How can you not understand that? Were you brain fked by a donkey or smth?