NayYun

yeah we've heard this a thousand times, you can stop now

really? another repetitive paragraph that's been present in almost every other chapter?

Firstly to improve this book, REPETITION must be toned down, I swear I read the fact that he's only weaker than some 3 celestial dudes every chapter and some primordial realm. just let that rest. I need some character development as well, there's barely any, aside from what we know: he's cold and aloof, and yeah? what about it? that don't mean jack, needs better development. world development is a joke, there's technically none. the system is bare minimum, there's nothing to work with, bare missions. there needs something more, better fleshed out characters, and a better fleshed out world. the book so far is mediocre, it needs more instead of repetitive celestial crap. on some chapters, celestial emperor's are mentioned more than needed. the book is enjoyable for people that are braindead however, this book must be improved in all aspects. aside from it, it's a wish novel. mediocre at best so far, I will continue to read and give a new review once things start to improve.