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Infractuous
InfractuousAuthor6yr
2018-09-06 12:34

I am still a new author, so there will be a few hiccups in my book, but I will try to smooth them out as I find them. Constructive criticism is accepted, so please comment on any errors you find.

The God System (Old)

Infractuous
4.4
73 Chs

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Melshan
MelshanLv7

The MC Will have a girlfriend or Harém? 😍😍

6yr
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Infractuous
InfractuousAuthor

He will at least have one woman, and maybe a harem

Melshan:The MC Will have a girlfriend or Harém? 😍😍
6yr
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kumarpavan021
kumarpavan021Lv3

need more chapters please :)

6yr
1
Torren
TorrenLv3

Please, no Harem. New authors will always definitely suck at harems. They are a double or nothing’s strat witch only skilled people can actually pull off. Like the author of savage divinity.

6yr
2
MoonlessLotusLake
MoonlessLotusLakeLv6

Noooo. Harem noooo.

6yr
1
DarkKnight32
DarkKnight32Lv6

I love the idea you got here hope you dont drop it ty for your hard work

6yr
1
qrhdjdjdhr
qrhdjdjdhrLv5

NC

6yr
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YumGod
YumGodLv10

NO HAREM NO LIFE!!! and if u decide to make harem atleast make it a bit detail and dont be like one of the aurthor who make a girl into a mc harem and the girl is not mention anymore lol

6yr
3
Chaotic_Winter
Chaotic_WinterLv13

Yo!! Why maybe??? It’s got a fking system so it has to be a harem

Infractuous:He will at least have one woman, and maybe a harem
6yr
2
Chaotic_Winter
Chaotic_WinterLv13

Savage divinity??? Can you send me the link??

Torren:Please, no Harem. New authors will always definitely suck at harems. They are a double or nothing’s strat witch only skilled people can actually pull off. Like the author of savage divinity.
6yr
Infractuous
InfractuousAuthor

It is on Royal Road. Should not be to hard to find

Chaotic_Winter:Savage divinity??? Can you send me the link??
6yr
GaelBlue
GaelBlueLv5

Please make it bl make him bend please....

Infractuous:He will at least have one woman, and maybe a harem
6yr
Infractuous
InfractuousAuthor

Sorry to disappoint, but I don't think I will be able to write that

GaelBlue:Please make it bl make him bend please....
6yr
BloodHeaven
BloodHeavenLv5

I like the picture of your story😂

6yr
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SHIROSAIKI
SHIROSAIKILv4

is it a harem now?? please i hope it is a harem

Infractuous:He will at least have one woman, and maybe a harem
6yr
2
faijay98
faijay98Lv5

Sweet!! That's cool!! Thanks.

Infractuous:He will at least have one woman, and maybe a harem
6yr
Immortalhotpotato
ImmortalhotpotatoLv4

Please make it a harem where all the decent waifus get added 😁 p.s all the best in writing 😁

Infractuous:He will at least have one woman, and maybe a harem
5yr
Other Reviews
Precheur
PrecheurLv5

From the few years i've been reading web novel, we can make 3 distincts sorts of novel. Chinese / Japan / Korean. This novel is Japan. For those who hate this Japan categorie, don't try you will think it's ****. For the others, go ahead, i think you will really like it.

6yr

Democratis
DemocratisLv11

Great Start, looking forward to more! MORE CHAPTERS! MORE CHAPTERS! MORE CHAPTERS!MORE CHAPTERS!MORE CHAPTERS!MORE CHAPTERS!MORE CHAPTERS!MORE CHAPTERS!

6yr
Atryx10
Atryx10Lv13

At first it seemed decent. Then my warningbells rang. Then it went and did it. It went and did what shouldn't be done. Your standard Japanese LN

6yr
SkyZerx
SkyZerxLv5

Very interesting idea. I hope you can manage such story. I really want to know what will happen next. Can you make several chapters per week?

6yr
kumarpavan021
kumarpavan021Lv3

for me its an unique imagination to be a god and its fun because i think it will be harrem, haha waiting for more chapters for MC to become more OP

6yr
lightningfast2
lightningfast2Lv4

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6yr
Tarhanis
TarhanisLv5

It is a second rate novel ... Disappointed, it could be great. I really don t like stupid ***** character, come on the guy was just abducted, have a system, o no problem is common do be teleported in another dimension. And seriously the god of thrill and adventure (****ty name), instead of asking basiq question, like where i am, why or how. No let s just take a childish name and let s play ... I don t know if is on purpose or if the mc is so stupid, careless, but atleast any ordinary humans should be way more surprised, afraid, confuse. So seriously if you are schearching for a readable novel with a mc who use at least a little of his brain and isn t retarded .... just pass and search another good novel. Otherwise, it is a really good idea and can be much more but it is destroyed by a main character plain stupid, unrealistic.

5yr
legionalle
legionalleLv4

I wish I could give this story a better review however the stability of updates ,or rather its unstability, really holds it back from being a better book. But in all seriousness i think this book is fairly good. it tries to be just the right amount of information and the story moves at a decent pace instead of a snails pace, which i find in quite a few books on webnovel. this book has a lot of potential and i would suggest anyone looking for something to just read casually with no real schedule ,read this book.

6yr
FourEyes
FourEyesLv12

If you love harem this is the good one! The only problem here that there some Japanese novel or manga influence! The story is about dungeon.

6yr
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