kingofdarkness2355

+1 lets goo

things bout to get good, eat them all!

This is actually great, I mean its HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM, but there is a clear story and plotline, not just meaningless sex.

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Its good so far, the dialouge are heavy but natural well written, he is quick witted and charming, always know what to say and no awkard cliche

Was worried about the Barry Allen part, but i am glad he is getting a character development. Is this wana pairing bc she is my favo and NO FUCKING IRIS THANK GOD

This is actually really great so far, Nice take on what happens during 2 time skip and Marco starting to hunt down his enemies and possibly re-shape the once whitebeard pirates?

Young whitebeard and OP MC TEAM UP!!! love the brother and trust dynamic and how they are gathering the crew from the start. Storyline great so far

BEST FANFICTION EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Great, Its really original and well written, the story makes sense and is well throughout.... actions and reactiosn also make perfect sense,