lucihano

the story my not make sense to readers and it's because i don't have this planned out whenever I'm about to release a chp that's when i start writing, this is not a excuse for the bad story if all of you think I'm bad then I'm bad because i as the writer can't judge my own writing only the readers have that right

your the reader if your unsatisfied just let me know I'm thankful your even reading my book, your great keep doing great things 👍 ❤

is that how you imagined it😆, i like your imagination👍

i was confused as to what to use between let it rip or go shoot, since that what they used in the manga, so i just decided to use something simple, but i used let it rip in the new chp

Fix and change are two entirely different things,(you told me so☝, did you not)

that's not what I'm talking about, i changed it and you said it was odd, so I'm asking if it's because you don't get the contax behind it?

Is it because you don't get the Contax behind it?

I just changed it, tell me if it works for you now?

I've fixed every problem in that chapter that i could, so if i my be so bold as to ask you to give it a reread. From the author lucihano

I'm just letting you know as you seem to be the most interested in my book, that i have completely rewritten that chapter, and I'd like you to give it a reread if i may as Please. Frome the author lucihano😁